Draft Script: 1

Draft Script 1:

PARTY SCENE:

{Close up of drink bottles, drugs, and mess from party General}

General: People chatting music and laughter. 

{Cut to group of boys talking – close up on Will before showing other characters}  

Boy friend 1: Alright Jack, you ok?

Jack: *no response*

Friend 2: Jack?

Jack: Oh yeah yeah (slurred)

{Cut to Meg with a group girls – close up on Meg before showing other characters}

Girl friend 1: Do you think you’re gunna take him back?

Emma: I’m not sure, I just wanna to go home to be honest, have you seen Jack? (distressed and drunk)

*Emma goes looking for Jack*

*Girl friend 1*

Girl Friend 1: Jack, are you okay I think Emma wants to go home

Jack: Ur yeah yeah I’ll come in a sec

Emma: Alright we’ll be by the car

*Shot of Jack’s face stumbling through the house*

Extra’s: Jack are you okay?{echoed}

Extra’s: Jack are you okay?{echoed}

CAR CRASH:

Emma: Jack, you ok to drive?

Jack: Yeah fine (slurred)

*sister and brother get in car, brother begins to lose focus and control of the car*

Emma: Jack! What are you doing!?

*Emma is emotional and shouting, holding onto the car as the car veers out of control*

The dialogue then ends when the car hits the tree.

The Casting Process

We felt it essential the our protagonists suited the age and maturity this film represents, also the style. We have taken headshots of people we are considering and have evaluated them. We are have also asked other potential candidates to perform a monologue for us to distinguish their acting talent. This will be shows in a later blog.

Will Holland

 

Benedict Clark

Tez Mustafa

Bethan Williamson

Conor Jackson

 Ross Milne

The Conventions of a Film Poster and Analysis

We have seen as a great a great importance in looking into film poster features and how they can represent the genre, narrative and mood, as well as interest viewers, through typical conventions.We have analysed Trainspotting which is a popular social realism film, which is the genre we have chosen. We can therefore now establish things we need to include in our poster or places where we would not like to conform to conventions.

Party Inspiration

The following shots show a real insight of what we wish to achieve from the party shots of our character named Jack.They have provided a great inspiration and clear idea in our head.

Juxtaposition with music

For shots of the party we really liked the way that this music video was created and clearly represented the obvious effects of intoxication  This shot is effective in the way it follows the protagonist and we are keen to recreate something in homage to this sort of shot.

We have used copyright free music over this music video to develop our idea further, this music video shows clearly the juxtaposition and binary opposition we will create.

We looked for some exemplar clips that demonstrated one of our key shots which is a close up of Jack's face walking through the party with dialogue in the back. After watching an example from Movern Callar we decided to attach a clip of classical music to a similar shot from Mean Streets.

Health and Safety

Things We Need to Consider

Location

Due to using a road it is essential for us to be aware and also respectful of other drivers. We cannot block the road and have to have the ability to quickly move the car if a car wishes to past. We must also leave the hazard lights on when dark so we are easily visible.

Cast
Due to it being an emotional trailer we need to keep the mental state of our cast well. We cannot expose them to emotional harm.We therefore have chosen a mature cast who know of the themes of the trailer and are comfortable with it. They also have had no traumatic traffic incidents and therefore no emotional distress will be caused.


Props

Due to the idea of youth culture and intoxication being highly present we are having cigarettes,drugs and alcohol present as props. However we have found safe substitutes so not to break the law and not expose our cast to things they may feel uncomfortable with . We will use empty bottles and pour away the alcohol, or use water to display vodka and juice to display wine. We will use herbal cigarettes which have no health effects, but we will also not allow our cast members to inhale the smoke and to portray cocaine we are using flour.


Car Crash

Due to our car crash being such an essential scene and our climax we need to make it are realistic as possible, however we do not actually want to crash. Our cast are all wearing seat belts, we have airbags installed, we are stopping considerably before the tree so to create the illusion of a crash but not put anyone at risk. We are using toy gas canisters so to not release harmful gas and using sugar glass which cannot cause harm.

Party Scene
No drugs nor alcohol are real. We will also keep our cast and extras hydrated and give them suitable breaks. They will also be advised to wear warm clothing due to it being shot outside to prevent hypothermia.

Sugar Glass Experiment

Sugar glass is frequently used in television programmes and in film instead of real glass which raises health and safety issues. It is easy to make and reduced risk of hurting one of our cast or leaving smashed glass at our location. The following is how we aim to create this

Location

We have chosen these locations and in a following blog I will post photos of these with pros and cons. One of the most essential things while picking location is to consider the health and safety of all. This is discussed in my other blog.

Sound

Script

The numbers on here correlate with the ones on the storyboard. The real theme of our trailer is enhanced diegetic sound which will increase the intensity and reflect the enhanced sense and paranoia that drugs cause. We will have dialogue however it will either be muted or muffled. Music will be played over these shots making dialogue difficult. Some shots from our storyboard have no sound except the soundtrack. The ones with sound are listed and described below.We decided to write 2 scripts one mostly revolving around enhanced diegetic sound (below) and one dialogue heavy. This allowed us to have a larger variety of clips after filming and also ignited inspiration

1-Enhanced diegetic sound of a clink of a bottle

4-Hand wiping away cocaine of the car bonnet

5-“You alright Jack” – Very muffled and confused

6-Wind,footsteps,bird’s chirping

7-“You alright Jack” – Very muffled and confused

8-Rustling of keys- “You drive”- muted

9-Shot glass put on surfaces,clinks

11-Tires screeching

12-Foot kicking a glass bottle

13-Laughs

15-Engine roaring

16-Lighter clicks and breathing of smoke being puffed out

18-Jack heavy breathing and panicking

19-Revving of engine 

20-Deep breathing,puff

21-Falling of phone-bang, then silence 

22-Gas from car,drip of oil,beep

23-Scream

24-Silence

25-Silence, gas and dripping oil from car
26-Deep sound of inhale/ exhale
27-Head hitting again steering wheel
30-Crime scene banner in rustling in wind
33-Sobbing
34-Enhanced natural sound e.g. wind through the trees
35-Sobbing whilst she drives car flashback sound from crash

Juxtaposition and Inspiration

One of our key shots is Jack walking through the party highly intoxicated on alcohol and drugs, we had put on our storyboard that this was a close up . However, We looked for some exemplar clips that demonstrated this look. After watching an example from Movern Callar we decided to fix a clip of classical music to a similar shot from Mean Streets.We felt this juxtposition raised the pace of the film and created more drama.   We also learnt from different YouTube tutorials and music videos that a very effective way to display intoxication  and have a close shot is by the protagonist holding a tray with a camera on and filming themself in the party atmosphere. This is shaky due to it being hand held,close up and will raise tension for the viewer.